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NOTE: I fixed the size and added the little mushroom for her to sit, also i gave more space for the tree on the back. thank you for the tips. thank you Tofubeast xD

Carrot time~ I barely made it! i've being busy with summer school and now that I enjoy my wonderful vacations! I got time to begin and finish this in 2 days xD it was a rushed job but the results came out great♥ and I hope you all enjoy this work! specially you sis, my dear Iris xD I promised that I was going to do it and here it is.



Mistress Sara© :iconbluenavy:


A Twist in Wonder©*:iconiris-zeible:
The Samurai Duelers League©*:iconroninsultramix:
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Sara con glasses?

*cracks knuckles* Hoo-kay, let's see what I can do for crit, since you said you wanted some!

The background is a very lovely painterly style, and the colors don't seem too garish or clashy.

On to Sara. Not too bad, but she doesn't really look as though she's crouching or sitting on anything. If she's sitting on her knees, she's look a bit different pose-wise. If she's crouching, she'd be on the balls of her feet.

The arm facing the view is alright. It's kinda hanging there , but it isn't too bad. It's in proportion, so it's good.

Her bent arm looks too short, and is kind of bent awkwardly...I don't think the elbow would be hidden like that. That side profile pose is a bitch to draw, true, but that could be improved.

Oh, one more thing. Now that I look at it again, it looks as though you tried to draw her sprawled out on the ground. Her other foot wouldn't be in that position, nor would the skirt fall that way. For those kind of poses, it's good to get a reference.

Anyway, that's my word on it. *slinks away*